diff xml/en/docs/http/ngx_http_geoip_module.xml @ 966:95c3c3bbf1ce

Text review.
author Egor Nikitin <yegor.nikitin@gmail.com>
date Wed, 14 Aug 2013 12:03:41 +0400
parents 9dab69f2b71d
children 07402a11fd8d
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--- a/xml/en/docs/http/ngx_http_geoip_module.xml
+++ b/xml/en/docs/http/ngx_http_geoip_module.xml
@@ -16,12 +16,12 @@
 
 <para>
 The <literal>ngx_http_geoip_module</literal> module (0.8.6+) creates variables
-whose values depend on the client IP address, using the precompiled
+with values depending on the client IP address, using the precompiled
 <link url="http://www.maxmind.com">MaxMind</link> databases.
 </para>
 
 <para>
-When using IPv6 databases (1.3.12, 1.2.7),
+When using the databases with IPv6 support (1.3.12, 1.2.7),
 IPv4 addresses are looked up as IPv4-mapped IPv6 addresses.
 </para>
 
@@ -63,7 +63,7 @@ http {
 <context>http</context>
 
 <para>
-Specifies a database used to determine a country
+Specifies a database used to determine the country
 depending on the client IP address.
 The following variables are available when using this database:
 <list type="tag">
@@ -98,7 +98,7 @@ country name, for example,
 <context>http</context>
 
 <para>
-Specifies a database used to determine a country, region, and city
+Specifies a database used to determine the country, region, and city
 depending on the client IP address.
 The following variables are available when using this database:
 <list type="tag">
@@ -185,7 +185,7 @@ postal code.
 <appeared-in>1.0.3</appeared-in>
 
 <para>
-Specifies a database used to determine an organization
+Specifies a database used to determine the organization
 depending on the client IP address.
 The following variable is available when using this database:
 <list type="tag">
@@ -226,10 +226,10 @@ header field will be used instead.
 <appeared-in>1.2.1</appeared-in>
 
 <para>
-If recursive search is disabled then instead of an original client
+If recursive search is disabled then instead of the original client
 address that matches one of the trusted addresses, the last
 address sent in <header>X-Forwarded-For</header> will be used.
-If recursive search is enabled then instead an original client
+If recursive search is enabled then instead of the original client
 address that matches one of the trusted addresses, the last
 non-trusted address sent in <header>X-Forwarded-For</header> will be used.
 </para>