--- a/xml/en/docs/control.xml
+++ b/xml/en/docs/control.xml
@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@
 <article name="Controlling nginx"
          link="/en/docs/control.html"
          lang="en"
-         rev="1">
+         rev="2">
 
 <section>
 
@@ -212,35 +212,29 @@ 36267 36264 nobody   0.0  1364 kqread ng
 <para>
 It should be noted that the old master process does not close its listen
 sockets, and it can be managed to start its worker processes again if needed.
-If for some reason the new executable file works unacceptably, the following
-can be done:
+If for some reason the new executable file works unacceptably, one of the
+following can be done:
 <list type="bullet">
 
 <listitem>
 <para>
 Send the HUP signal to the old master process.
-The old process will start new worker processes without re-reading the
-configuration.
-After that, new processes can be shut down gracefully, by sending
-their master process the QUIT signal.
+The old master process will start new worker processes
+without re-reading the configuration.
+After that, all new processes can be shut down gracefully,
+by sending the QUIT signal to the old master process.
 </para>
 </listitem>
 
 <listitem>
 <para>
-Send the TERM signal to the new master process, it will then send a
-message to its worker processes requesting them to exit immediately,
-and they will all exit almost immediately.
+Send the TERM signal to the new master process.
+It will then send a message to its worker processes requesting them
+to exit immediately, and they will all exit almost immediately.
+If the new worker processes do not exit for some reason,
+the KILL signal should be sent to them.
 When the new master process exits, the old master process will start new
-worker processes.
-</para>
-</listitem>
-
-<listitem>
-<para>
-If new processes do not exit, the KILL signal should be sent to them.
-When the new master process exits, the old master process will start new
-worker processes.
+worker processes automatically.
 </para>
 </listitem>
 
@@ -254,7 +248,7 @@ the <path>.oldbin</path> suffix from the
 </para>
 
 <para>
-If upgrade was successful, then the old master process can be sent
+If upgrade was successful, then the old master process should be sent
 the QUIT signal, and only new processes will stay:
 <programlisting>
   PID  PPID USER    %CPU   VSZ WCHAN  COMMAND